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OakHeart's Pain: Prologue

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The slim silver fae looks around for a place to hide, the clan cats growing closer, she suddenly scrambles up a tree, down below she can see the clan cats running by, she sighs quietly, slowly climbing down the tree, when she just touches the ground, she gets tackled by a sand colored fae, she started to scream before her mouth was covered, “Who, Are, You?” the sandy Fae asks, “i'hm shilvhermhist” she attempts to reply, “What?” she says uncovering the sliver fae's mouth, “I-i'm Silvermist, Former med cat of DeathClan” “What do u mean by Former?” “My clan is dead” silver mist says quickly, “Sooo, should it be called “DeadClan” Insted of “DeathClan? Ehh ehh” she sandy fae tries to joke “... your bad at making jokes, if that is what you where trying to do” “I know..” “eh, anyways, I’m SandClaw warrior of StormClan, Why are u in are territory” “M-my clan died and with survivors are trying to hunt ecother down to rebuild the clan... witch they cannot do with out me, cause BlueFire Dead med cat is, well, dead... also, can u let me up Please...” “Fine Just, Don't run.” “o o-ok” “Want to talk to our leader about seeking shelter in StormClan?” “U-uh ok” “oh one more thing, why don't you want to go back to your clan and help rebuild it?” “My clan disrespected me and my mentor, they hated medic cats, they attacked all that they saw, including me, they also made us brake the medic code and forced us to have kits” Sandclaws eyes widen “O Ok.. just try to forget about that now.. just follow me” “ok, where we going?” “we are going to the mane river, where dark has the warriors all gathered” “all of them?” “well, no, some are at camp just in case.” “Ohhh ok that makes sense” when they get there silvermist looks around seeing about 35 cats “WOW Your Clan has ALOT Of Warriors!” “eh, yeah we do” she looks at silvermist, then suddenly a Huge Black Tom With a icy blue eyes. came up and asked “Who Is This, Sandclaw?” SandClaw dips her head a little then looks up at him and answers “she is Silvermist Former medic cat of DeathClan, her clan was destroyed.” “hmm” he said looking at silvermist, Silvermist looks at the Big Cat, “she can stay for Now, but she must leave tomorrow inless she shows some use she can be.” “Ok, darkie” The black tom looks at SandClaw “darn it Sandclaw! We have been over this, no using nick names near outsiders!” “Sorry Dar-” she catches herself “Sorry DarkStar” “Better, now im going to go talk to torn” “k bye” the huge tom pads away, “sooo, I’m guessing that’s your leader?” Silvermist says smugly “What EVER Gave you THAT Idea” sandclaw says full of sarcasm, “I don’t know, the ordering around” she sticks out her toung at sandclaw, “OH What ever lets just go introduce you to some of the clan” “Mk” Sandclaw walks up to a group of cats leaving silvermist standing there, Silvermist Quickly follows her to suddenly hear DarkStar Yelling “STORMCLAN, I WANT 8 OF YOU TO STAY HERE AND BE A HUNTING PATROLL. THE REST O YOU BACK TO CAMP” then suddenly all the cats start heading to camp, silvermist notices 7 staying, “are we staying?” “yes we are, since your a guest you Probably don’t count” She sticks out her toung at silvermist “your probably right” she sighs, Then once all the others leave, the other 7 come over and tell ecother where to hunt, then silvermist wispers to sandclaw kinda loudly “I-i smell fox..” Sandclaws head shoots up and she starts to sniff “FOX!!” She Screams then another cat sniffs too “TWO FOXES!!!” He Shouts, they quickly get ready too fight, Quickly the foxes amerge from the bushes the female Holding a young fae, the fox tosses the young fae aside, silvermist sees the fae not moving realizing its dead, then sandclaw leaps at the female fox, atacking it, 4 of the warriors atack the male, the other 2 helping sandclaw, then silvermist leaps in and helps atack the female, then the fox lashes out flings then all off of the fox, the fox quickly runs up to one of them quckly biteing at there next, the cat quckly moves out of the way, then Sandclaw charges at the fox only to trip over a stone, the fox looks at her and charges mouth open ready to kill her, when silvermist tackled the fox's side, the fox looks at silvermist and snaps at her neck, only to miss by a intch, the other warriors atack the fox from behind, then suddnly the fox grabs silvermist's back and swings her around tossing her into a tree, sandclaw jumps over the rock she triped on and atacks the fox, they slowly drive off the fox, silvermist, lies there next to the tree, Dead. Sandclaws and the other 2 warriors, drove off the female, and started to help atack the male, the male fox runs away, because he was out numbered by 6, after they catch there breath they start to head back to camp with the wonded and then sandclaw rembers Silvermist, and goes to pick her up, to find her lieing there Dead. Sandclaw takes the fallen medic back to camp, where they bury her.



Ye I tried, chapter 1 is almost done, so I gave u guys the prolog im happy with how it turned out,


This is a More or less realistic vershion of what happing in my clan im in on aj, this happened about last july (2015) so hehe I might have got some stuff wrong, and I did join the clan, just I was a deffernt cat.
now, a lot of thease guys came back very wounded.
everyone in my clan has nicknames, darkstar's are: Darkie, Dark, And Darla. Sandclaws's are: Sandy Sandyman, Sandman. (and my nickname for her, Mahmah sandy)
The Deputys name is TornSoul

The Owner Of Sandclaw is: SandehSC 
The Owner Of DarkStar Is: Soulentokino0107 
The Owner Of BlueFire Is: Oak-Storm (Pfft I randomly made the name, so she tenchily isn't mine but watva)
The Owner Of SilverMist Is: Oak-Storm 

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silverstaramh's avatar
What I find funny is we actually have a blue fire in our clan X3 and it's a name you just made up